The critique group said I had a very good variety of textures. The sequencing was done well. The book was bound together by tape but it could have been much neater and the overall craft could be improved by making sure all the edges are straight and the pages exactly the same size.
This was my first project, but I improved it by taking out the crumbed paper at the bottom, making the big squares on the edges straighter and bigger, and lastly fixing the square in the middle so that it resembles my original composition more.
The improved project
The group said that the texture does not conflict and that they harmonize well together. They liked the way the middle square is floating and that the whole piece on the wall looked like it was floating so elevation was good. The craft could be improved a little bit. They did not like that the middle square was not placed exactly at the middle of the texture so that it looked like it was shining. So that part impacted the project negatively. They could see continuance, closure, and proximity. They thought I chose good materials and that they were appropriate. They craft of the larger squares could be better. The craft of the larger squares hurt the piece because they said they were too large so it does not make a straight edge with the side of the texture paper.
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