For my cardboard project, I have a lot that I could improve upon. My group critiqued my piece and said that they enjoyed a certain texture that I had on the layers of the acorn. Some of the texture was better than others. My piece had a disconnect from the top where they said it looked like cardboard was just thrown on top and the rest looked like I actually worked on it. A lot of hot glue was showing and it looked a little bit rushed. Another thing that was wrong with my piece that made it not as enjoyable was the shape of it. It was suggested that I could have made the acorn more circular.
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